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:iconbezzalair:
heh, um... Patchs' idea isn't as evil as I made it look out to be in the last panel... o__o; In fact, it's not evil at all... Maybe I should have toned down a bit their evil-looking faces...


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Death Chicken is (C) to me (Caylee) and Lyssa ~dumbsquared (my editor).
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:icongrassy-aggron:
~Grassy-Aggron Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Patch is just naturally evil looking. Not his fault.
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:iconophiguris:
'We Need To Get Past Them Because Our Door We Need To Get To Is Clear On The Other Side Of The House' O_o?

That seems a little lengthy : d, and I'm not sure it makes sense..

does he mean 'We have to get past them because the door we need is clear on the other side'? -because they just came from the door on the other side of the house no O.o?

Or does he mean 'we need to get past them because we can only get into the door we need from the other side'? O.o, because they're 'behind it' and it only opens one way?
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:iconbezzalair:
You are so right. xD
I don't think too much when typing sometimes. I usually have a second pair of eyes look it over, but my sister, who usually checks is out of town right now. I'm happy that watchers like you spot these things~ :hug: Thank you!

I went with *Gallantmon's suggestion. :)
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:iconophiguris:
Cool! Just helping you out when you go to publishers :la:
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:iconbezzalair:
Thank yeeew~ :hug: I really do appreciate it!
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:iconophiguris:
I'll be as diligent as I can :la:!
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:icongallantmon:
*Gallantmon Jan 8, 2013  Student Filmographer
I actually thought about that awkwardness in that dialogue too.

I was thinking this might work....."That door is on the other side of the house. If we want to get to it, we need to find a way past them."

Personally, I would have simplified Hester's question in the next panel to "How?" instead of "So what do we do?", but that's up to Bezzalair whether or not she wants to make that correction.
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:iconbezzalair:
I read your comment and made the corrections~ 8D
Thank you~ :glomp:
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:iconbandanablue:
~BandanaBlue Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay... worse case scenario is the worm king going to our world... God help us.
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:iconfackingbastard:
" toned down a bit their evil-looking faces"?! never! hehe besides it might be a good thing to surpirse the reader;)
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